24 May 2013

Descriptive Writing on the White Heron

Hayden
Click on the links to view the student's work.

Anthony
Declan
Gina
Ben
Gabriel
George
Lear
Yash
Lachie
Mini
Caleb
Zinzan
Brodie
Felicity
Quintin
Sophie
Summer
Thornton
William
Alex
Millie
Paramveer
Penny
Chloe
Mystique
Henry
Hayden

15 comments:

  1. Yes it is a good photo your dad is good at taking photos! The white heron is good at keeping still for photos it was amassing being that close for real espeshaly for peopel who have not seen one be for. fj

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  2. Looking awesome Mr Cooke.

    ALEX.B

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  3. Ricky take's rely good photo's the best thing I like is the dazzling refletion of the Heron in the cold stream. YP

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  4. The refection of the Roupo and the heron is stunning in the photo. BP

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  5. I went on my white heron and did some more work on it.SF

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  6. My dad laughed when I showedvhim my descriptive writing. Thanks for commenting on my writing. TT

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  7. there great i looked at some of them today!
    bp

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  8. I looked at some today, they were great!

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  9. I was amazed at the activeities they were great bw

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  10. Good to see you guys reading your work, I think the writing is very good.

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  11. I need to work on my heron writing S.T

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